雅思寫作范文：青少年犯罪的根源

Task：Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem?

思路解析：

青少年犯罪的根源1：媒體暴力的誤導(dǎo)，讓他們對于暴力產(chǎn)生崇拜，錯誤地認為通過犯罪來獲取財富是合適的。

青少年犯罪的根源2：在經(jīng)濟蕭條的大背景下，就業(yè)變得十分困難，很多年輕人被迫選擇犯罪來謀生，或是報復(fù)社會。

解決之道：對于出版物進行審查和分類，這能把那些不良的信息過濾掉。還有就是免費的就業(yè)培訓(xùn)，這能讓年輕人獲取實際的技能，幫助他們在找工作中獲得優(yōu)勢。

參考范文：

Nowadays, it has been reported that there has been an increasing number of crimes committed by youngsters in major cities all over the world. What causes this phenomenon and what people could do to resolve the problem have been widely discussed. In this essay, I would investigate the reasons and suggest some possible solutions accordingly.

There are two main reasons why this kind of crimes is on the increase. Firstly, violence on the internet, TV programs and video games is responsible for this situation. It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could render young people aggressive. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to crimes. Secondly, low employment rate in many big cities around the world could be another major reason. Most countries are experiencing economic plateau or even backwards due to global economic crisis occurring a few years ago. Consequently, many businesses and factories have decided to cut off their staff or ten d to employ experienced workers over young graduates. This means some youngsters become jobless spontaneously once they graduate. Some of them even turn to commit crimes to make a living or get revenge on society.

In order to solve the problem, some main methods are advised accordingly. The first solution is to apply censorship and classification in issuing programs. This means governments or non-governmental organizations should censor the violent and prostitute contents of programs and label them such as “adult only” or “viewers excluded below 14” before programs are publicized. This would help to keep youngsters from too much violence on programs away. Another method is to carry out free job training programs designed closely related to the demand of the job market. After training, youngsters, more of ten than not, can expect better chances of being employed. Other ways could include tax-reduction policy for university graduates self-employment, providing paid social service positions for youngsters, etc.

To conclude, methods such as censorship on programs and free job training for youngsters are strongly recommended too much violence on programs and low employment.

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