在雅思寫作中注意從句的使用是好的,但是同時(shí)也要注意,雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中,對(duì)語法的要求叫做Grammatical Range and Accuracy就是語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性。而從句套從句的模式,即使句子長(zhǎng)度很長(zhǎng),但向考官展示的也只是一種語法項(xiàng)目。如果我們從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的角度思考的話,我們首先需要關(guān)注的是我們語法的精準(zhǔn),也就是說,要先保證自己語言的準(zhǔn)確性作為大前提,然后注意多種句型的組合,比如倒裝句啊,強(qiáng)調(diào)句啊,虛擬語氣啊等等。我們要注意長(zhǎng)短句的搭配使用,而不是一味地追求句子的長(zhǎng)度。
如果光聽我說不夠有說服力,大家再來看一下雅思口語考官對(duì)于這個(gè)問題是怎么回答的:
Many students seem to think that the following is true: long sentences = complex = high score. This is not true. Long sentences are just short sentences that have been linked together. It's easy to write a long sentence. It's also easy to write a long sentence which is full of mistakes!
You don't need to be Shakespeare to get a band 7 (or band 9)! You just need to write clear, organised sentences which answer the question and contain some good vocabulary.
很多同學(xué)認(rèn)為以下這個(gè)是正確的:長(zhǎng)句子=復(fù)雜句=高分。這種想法是錯(cuò)的。長(zhǎng)句子只是互相結(jié)合在一起的短句子。寫出一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句子是很容易的,當(dāng)然,寫出一個(gè)充分語法錯(cuò)誤的長(zhǎng)句子也是容易的!要想拿7分或9分,你不需要像莎士比亞那樣!你只需要寫出清晰有邏輯的句子,并且這些句子是緊扣題目并包含一些好的詞匯的。
總的來說,雅思寫作要想拿高分,關(guān)鍵還是在于是否扣題,詞匯是否準(zhǔn)確,而并不在于是否使用從句套從句。