2018年雅思考試寫作范文(9)

　　The above four pie charts show the expenditure condition in four countries, Korea, America, Britain, and Kenya during 1990-1995. It infects the great difference that exists between wealthier and poorer nations.

　　As we can see from the pie charts, American and British people tend to spend more money on defense and health. The proportion of health in America and Britain, which occupied/took up/comprised 15% and 17% respectively, was higher than the other two countries. The proportion of defend was over 20%, particularly in America up to 21%. The corresponding figures for Kenya and Korea were 4% and 5% each.

　　The noticeable character of expenditure in Korea and Kenya was higher expense proportion on education. There are 16% and 12% of the total expenditure used by them on education. These figures were overwhelmingly higher than the corresponding figure of 6% in America and 5% in Britain.

　　These four countries have similar condition in the expenditure aspect of education, defend and health, which was about 70% of the overall outgoings.