雅思大作文方案類議論文高分范文(5)

　　Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy

　　Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it?

　　Key words analysis

　　• educational standards: 教育標準

　　• particularly: 特別地，一般用于強調在一類事物里尤其突出的，相當于typically

　　• literacy: 讀寫能力

　　• numeracy: 算術能力

　　Argument:

　　• 這是屬于議論文中的problem的類型，通常會在要求學生表達對這個問題的看法和給出一些解決方案。

　　Possible causes :

　　• 現在對學生的懲罰手段還不夠完善

　　• 對于其他邊際科目的重視

　　Possible solutions:

　　• 完善對學生的獎懲制度

　　• 合理分配各個學科的學習時間

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　The issue of falling educational standards is of great importance in the world today. In this essay, I will briefly discuss some of the main causes of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.

　　Main body 1

　　In my view, one of the main reasons for poor quality education is that school students are not disciplined properly. In the past, teachers could smack or cane children who misbehaved. Now, however, this kind ofpunishment is not allowed and many teachers are losing control of their students as a result. If students do not listen, teachers cannot teach and learning becomes impossible. Clearly, discipline must be restored if we areto improve educational standards. Of course, there are many other ways to discipline children; however, I would argue that physical punishment is still the most effective method.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　Another reason for poor reading, writing and mathematical skills among students today is that many schools waste too much time teaching “soft” subjects like music, art and drama. These subjects are certainly interesting. However, they tend to distract students from more important subjects like mathematics and English. The more time a student spends learning how to paint, the less time they spend learning how to read. Thus, in order to improve basic literacy and numeracy, I would argue that schools should focus their attention on core subjects.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, this is such a complex problem that I don’t believe any real solution will be found in the near future. However, I am convinced that the steps mentioned above would be helpful.