雅思寫作考試論題講解：政府是否應(yīng)限制極限運(yùn)動

　　【政府類】

　　Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 有人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該限制危險性的運(yùn)動，有人認(rèn)為人人有權(quán)利選擇自己喜愛的運(yùn)動。討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見。(2011年7月30日 = 2014年8月9日)

　　【頭腦風(fēng)暴導(dǎo)言】

　　通常，令我們敬重和欣賞之人皆有共性：第一，他們做了我們渴望做，但是，卻未敢嘗試的事情。第二，他們成功地做成了我們嘗試未果的事情。深海潛水，讓人探究神秘的海底世界;勇攀高峰，讓人體味一覽眾山小的豪情;海上帆板，讓人感受劈風(fēng)斬浪的激情。探索未知是人之本性，挑戰(zhàn)自我是人之追求。完善自我保護(hù)，加強(qiáng)專業(yè)訓(xùn)練，若如此，人人都應(yīng)嘗試一些極限運(yùn)動。

　　【作家立場】 人生沒有冒險就不能稱其為人生(支持極限運(yùn)動)。

　　【文章布局】：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 作家立場

　　二段：正方觀點的展開(我的口吻談及極限運(yùn)動的利好)

　　三段：反方觀點的展開(我的口吻談及極限運(yùn)動的弊端)

　　尾段：再次亮明觀點 + 提出建議

　　【語料庫】

　　① 極限運(yùn)動危險運(yùn)動的類型：

　　1. bungee jumping n蹦極

　　2. paragliding n跳傘

　　3. surfing n海上沖浪

　　4. scuba-diving = deep sea diving n 深海潛水

　　5. rock climbing n攀巖

　?、?極限運(yùn)動之多元表達(dá)：

　　1. run the risk of doing sth v冒險做……

　　2. dangerous sports activities n危險性體育運(yùn)動

　　3. challenging sports events n充滿挑戰(zhàn)性的競技體育

　　4. extreme adventures n極限運(yùn)動

　　5. extreme sports n極限運(yùn)動

　?、?支持極限運(yùn)動：

　　1. forge one’s fortitude v鑄造人的堅韌性

　　2. chasten one’s tenacity v 磨練人的頑強(qiáng)

　　3. foster one’s frustration toleration v培養(yǎng)人的挫折忍受能力

　　4. If they are banned，then many sports would go underground. 如果被限制，很多體育項目會消失。

　　5. surpass oneself v 超越自我

　?、?反對極限運(yùn)動：

　　1. suffer from injuries or even deaths v 遭遇傷害甚至死亡

　　2. become an excuse for violence v成為暴力的借口

　　⑤ 作家立場：

　　1. Greater attempts should be made to prevent accidents or injuries v 我們應(yīng)該做出努力預(yù)防以外事故和傷害

　　2. ensure sports are challenging, exciting and amusing v 確保運(yùn)動是充滿挑戰(zhàn)，令人興奮，使人愉快的。

　　【原創(chuàng)范文】：

　　{首段｝：背景介紹 + 作家立場

　　Such is human nature to explore the unknown. A trend is that numerous people are keen on embarking on challenging sports events such as mountain biking, rock climbing or scuba diving , especially among those dynamic young adults. My stand is that we should pursue excitement and sense of refreshment in the dull routine daily life. After all, life without risk is no life at all.

　　【解析】：Life without risk is no life at all 人生沒有冒險就不能稱其為人生。

　　{二段｝：正方觀點的展開：

　　Granted, many virtues could be gained via undertaking those risky sports activities. Primarily, the extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions, for the occupied modern life often deprives one’s right of seeking relaxation. The popularity of bungee jumping accounts for risky sports’ significant function in terms of reducing stress. Imaginably, one’s working efficiency could be highly enhanced after doing his or her favorite sports events. Moreover, not only can the extreme adventures exert wholesome impacts , but it also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. Some extreme adventures, such as rock climbing and surfing, requires high techniques or much stamina . Ultimately, the extreme adventures could be developed into tempting tourism items, which could generate immense economic value.

　　【解析】：

　　1.The extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions. 極限運(yùn)動是一種很好的方式去幫助運(yùn)動者緩解壓力，釋放不良情緒。

　　2. It also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. 極限運(yùn)動同意可以培養(yǎng)人的技能，磨練人的堅韌，鑄造人的挫折忍受能力。

　　{三段｝：反方觀點的展開：

　　Nonetheless, problems invariably ensue. One possible downside is that some perilous sports activities might become the roots of injuries and agonies. There exist high levels of injuries, which sometimes disables players and even ruins their lives. Another adverse aspect is that some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. To illustrate, boxing involves excessive violence and bloody contents so that it adversely influences adolescent Television viewers, namely, it might arouse their sadistic impulses.

　　【解析】：

　　1. Some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. 一些極限運(yùn)動也許會成為暴力的借口。

　　2. It might arouse their sadistic impulses. 極限運(yùn)動也許會誘發(fā)一個人施虐的沖動。

　　{尾段｝：再次亮明觀點 + 提出建議

　　Personally, I encourage the extreme adventures, for it symbolizes freedom, so it is citizens’ elementary right to opt for his or her favorite sports activities. Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making, however, to prevent accidents and injuries is highly recommended(328)

　　【解析】：

　　Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making. 我們應(yīng)該做出努力去保證極限運(yùn)動是刺激的、有趣的、盈利的。