托福寫作失敗開頭方式

　　“害死人”托福寫作開頭之一：過分簡單沒有重點(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important， let’s talk about it!

　　“害死人”托福寫作開頭之二：用詞不當 表達不準 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

　　“害死人”托福寫作開頭之三：意思重復(fù)原地踏步(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

　　“害死人”托福寫作開頭之四：中國俗語胡亂翻譯(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence： “Many sons， many lucks”……

　　正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

　　Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

　　We all know， our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said： “Know is know， don’t know is don’t know”……

　　Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

　　Chinese old words says very good： Dragon born dragon， phoenix born phoenix， rat’s son can make hole……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　I believe one sentence：“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say： “Good has good pay， bad has bad pay”。

　　“害死人”托福寫作開頭之五： 觀點武斷 態(tài)度強硬 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion， confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence， they all have failed。

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem， very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules， we should put all of them into prison. If we do that， I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

　　以上這幾種失敗的托福寫作開頭方式，不知同學(xué)們有沒有用過，希望能給大家一個參考，避免以后托福寫作中因此而拉低自己的寫作分數(shù)。聽力課堂建議大家在練習(xí)托福寫作中，不要唯模板是從，在參照模板的過程中，一定要有自己的思考，換位思考，避免寫作千篇一律，如果能有耳目一新的感覺，那么你的托福寫作就會在你托?？偝煽冎芯佑谏衔?。聽力課堂祝大家學(xué)習(xí)愉快，托?？荚嚾〉煤贸煽?