英語六級命題作文：大學學習和登山
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University Study and Mountain Climbing
Nowadays some people like to compare university study to mountain climbing-an activity that requires painstaking, persistent efforts and strong will if one expects to make it a success. In my opinion, university study and mountain climbing indeed have some similarities.
Firstly, both university study and mountain climbing require painstaking efforts. A student has many things to learn and will sure encounter lots of difficulties in the road of study; while a mountaineer will also face many difficulties before he or she reaches the peak of a mountain. Secondly, university study and mountain climbing require persistence. A university student should learn to accumulate knowledge for his or her ultimate exam, while a mountaineer should also learn to preserve energy for the ultimate challenge. Thirdly, a sustainable willpower is needed in both university study and mountain climbing. With many difficulties and frustrations around, a student or a mountaineer should face them with strong will.
Generally speaking, mountain climbing is not an easy thing, nor is university study. Though university study and mountain climbing are quite different, they actually have many things in common. Through the above analysis, we could conclude that dreams can only be achieved by painstaking efforts and strong will. (198 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段引出論點：學習和登山確實有很多相似之處。
第二段提出三個分論點進行論證：第一個分論點指出學習和登山一樣需要付出艱苦的努力;第二個分論點指出大學學習和登山一樣需要不斷的努力;第三個分論點指出大學學習和登山一樣需要堅強的意志做依靠。
最后一段總體概括并強調(diào)論點：登山不容易，大學學習也很不容易，但夢想的實現(xiàn)是靠著堅持不懈的努力和強壯的意志達成的。
大學學習和登山
現(xiàn)在有些人喜歡拿大學學習和登山做比較，登山是一種需要下苦功、堅持不懈的努力和堅強的意志才能獲得成功的活動。依我看來，大學學習和登山確實有一些相似點。
第一，大學學習和登山都需要勤懇的努力。學生有許多東西要學，而且在學習路上肯定會遇到許多困難;而一個攀登者在他或她到達頂峰之前，也會面臨很多困難。第二，大學學習和登山需要堅持不懈。一個大學生應(yīng)該學習為他(她)的期末考試積累知識，而一個攀登者也應(yīng)該學會為其最終挑戰(zhàn)積蓄能量。第三，大學學習和登山都需要持續(xù)的意志力。周邊有許多困難和挫折，學生或攀登者應(yīng)該用堅強的意志來對付它們。
一般說來，登山不是件容易的事情，大學學習也不是。雖然大學學習和登山很不相同，但其實它們在許多方面都有共同點。通過以上分析，我們可以得出結(jié)論：只有通過艱辛的努力和堅強的意志，才能實現(xiàn)夢想。
painstaking adj. 辛勤的，刻苦的
persistent adj. 持續(xù)的
similarity n. 相似，類似
encounter v. 遇到，遭遇
accumulate v. 堆積，積存
ultimate adj. 最后的，根本的
preserve v. 防護，維持
sustainable adj. 可持續(xù)的
frustration n. 挫折，沮喪
analysis n. 分析，分解
1. Nowadays some people like to compare university study to mountain climbing-an activity that requires painstaking, persistent efforts and strong will if one expects to make it a success. 現(xiàn)在有些人喜歡拿大學學習和登山做比較，登山是一種需要下苦功、堅持不懈的努力和堅強的意志才能獲得成功的活動。
2. A student has many things to learn and will sure encounter lots of difficulties in the road of study; while a mountaineer will also face many difficulties before he or she reaches the peak of a mountain. 學生有許多東西要學，而且在學習路上肯定會遇到許多困難;而一個攀登者在他或她到達頂峰之前，也會面臨很多困難。
3. With many difficulties and frustrations around, a student or a mountaineer should face them with strong will. 周邊有許多困難和挫折，學生或攀登者應(yīng)該用堅強的意志來對付它們。
