英語六級命題作文：自己學習還是請老師輔導
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- 結構剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
Learning by Yourself or with a Teacher
With the development of Chinese education, more and more students have easy access to private teachers in hope of improving one's learning efficiency. Now some people argue that learning with a teacher is better than learning by oneself. I think that, to some extent, learning by oneself is more efficient than learning with a teacher in some circumstances.
First of all, learning by oneself is a more personalized way for study improvement. Knowledge can be better obtained if one employs a more suitable study method. It's only by learning by oneself that one can find the most suitable way to acquire knowledge. In addition, one could concentrate on one's study when learning by oneself. Last but not the least, learning by oneself can improve one's independent learning ability, which is beneficial to one's life. Learning by oneself can provide one access to deep thoughts, which are beneficial to one's logical thinking and decision-making.
Generally speaking, learning by oneself is more efficient than learning with a teacher. Although learning with a teacher can help one in different ways, it's only by one's own effort that one can make progress. So it's more important to acquire knowledge by oneself than learn with a teacher. (200 words)
結構剖析
文章分為三段
第一段： 引出獨立學習和請老師輔導的問題，并提出論點。
第二段： 說明作者自己的觀點，即獨立學習比請老師輔導更為有效的原因。用了first of all, in addition和last but not the least闡述了三個方面的原因。
第三段： 總結全文，盡管請老師輔導能夠在很多方面幫助個人學習，但個人只有通過自己的努力才能取得進步，所以獨立學習比請老師輔導更加重要。
自己學習還是請老師輔導
隨著我國教育事業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的學生更容易請到私人教師，期望以此提高自己的學習效率?，F(xiàn)在有些人認為，請老師輔導比自己學習好。我認為，從某種程度來說，自己學習在一些情況下比請老師輔導更有效率。
首先，自己學習是提高學習成績更加個性化的方式。如果一個人采用更合適的學習方法，他可以更好地獲得知識。這只有通過自主學習，才能找到最合適自己的方式來獲取知識。此外，一個人在自主學習時可以集中精力學習。最后，但同樣重要的是，自主學習可以提高一個人的獨立學習的能力，對其一生都有利。自主學習可以提供一個途徑進行深思，這對一個人的邏輯思維和決策有幫助。
一般來說，自主學習比請老師輔導更有效率。雖然跟老師學習可以在不同方面對一個人有幫助，但只有通過自己的努力才能取得進步。因此，通過自主學習獲取知識要比請老師輔導更重要。
efficiency n. 效率，效能
to some extent 在某種程度上
circumstance n. 環(huán)境
personalized adj. 個性化的
concentrate on... 專心于
beneficial adj. 有利的，有益的
logical adj. 符合邏輯的
1. With the development of Chinese education, more and more students have easy access to private teachers in hope of improving one's learning efficiency. 隨著我國教育事業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的學生更容易請到私人教師，期望以此提高自己的學習效率。
2. I think that, to some extent, learning by oneself is more efficient than learning with a teacher in some circumstances.
我認為，從某種程度來說，自己學習在一些情況下比請老師輔導更有效率。
3. Last but not the least, learning by oneself can improve one's independent learning ability, which is beneficial to one's life. 最后，但同樣重要的是，自主學習可以提高一個人的獨立學習的能力，對其一生都有利。
