Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the additional score policy of the National College Entrance Examination based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容就“高考加分政策”這一話(huà)題進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)述，并根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。
2. 漫畫(huà)解讀：圖片上畫(huà)了一名高校招生錄取人員正在用放大鏡觀(guān)察高考成績(jī)。高考成績(jī)就像一棵大樹(shù)，長(zhǎng)滿(mǎn)了各種加分的枝杈。這名招生人員不禁感嘆：“這么多?。 庇纱艘l(fā)人們對(duì)高考加分政策的思考。
3. 文章立意：高考加分政策一直以來(lái)都是人們熱議的話(huà)題之一。在高考“一分定生死”的殘酷競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中，“加分”的意義之重大不言而喻。加分的初衷是彌補(bǔ)高校招生制度的不足，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生注重全面素質(zhì)的提高，但是現(xiàn)行的高考加分政策還存在一些弊端，亟需改進(jìn)。
寫(xiě)作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，然后提出論點(diǎn)：現(xiàn)行的高考加分政策給人們?cè)斐衫Щ蟆?/p>
2. 第二段主要通過(guò)舉例論證的方式闡述現(xiàn)行高考加分政策中的問(wèn)題，如腐敗問(wèn)題和不公平問(wèn)題。
3. 第三段呼應(yīng)文章論點(diǎn)，針對(duì)問(wèn)題提出應(yīng)對(duì)建議。
參考范文
As is shown in the above picture, a recruiter is examining the final scores of the National College Entrance Examination (NCEE) with a magnifier. According to his observation, the final result of NCEE is like a big tree with so many branches of additional scores that it astonishes him, which implies the confusion that the policy of additional score of NCEE has brought to people. 1
Undeniably, the policy of additional score originally aims to compensate for the limitations of NCEE and encourage students’ overall development. 2 However, there are some problems arising, with corruption being the first one. 3 Because of the loose design and non-transparent implementation processes, it is easy for some powerful people to take advantage of the policy. For example 4 , the students whose parents are in power can easily obtain additional scores by getting athletes technical grading certificates. Another problem is injustice. 3 NCEE is an academic examination for entrance into higher education institutions, so the policy of additional score is unfair to those students with higher academic ability.
In conclusion, there exist some problems in the current policy of additional score of NCEE. It is suggested that the policy be designed more strictly and be implemented more transparently. 5
如上圖所示，一名招生人員正在用放大鏡觀(guān)察高考成績(jī)。根據(jù)他的觀(guān)察，高考成績(jī)就像一棵大樹(shù)，長(zhǎng)滿(mǎn)如此多種加分的枝杈，連他都震驚不已。這表明了高考加分政策給人們帶來(lái)的困惑。
不可否認(rèn)，高考加分政策的本意是彌補(bǔ)高考的缺陷和鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生全面發(fā)展。然而，這種政策卻產(chǎn)生了一些問(wèn)題，第一個(gè)便是腐敗問(wèn)題。由于加分政策設(shè)計(jì)不夠嚴(yán)密，執(zhí)行程序不夠透明，這種政策很容易被一些有權(quán)力的人利用。比如，那些父母當(dāng)權(quán)的學(xué)生能夠輕易地獲得運(yùn)動(dòng)員技術(shù)等級(jí)資格證書(shū)從而獲得高考加分。另一個(gè)問(wèn)題是不公平。高考是進(jìn)入高等教育機(jī)構(gòu)的學(xué)術(shù)考試，加分對(duì)于有真正高水平的學(xué)生不公平。
總之，現(xiàn)行的高考加分政策中存在一些問(wèn)題。建議加分政策的設(shè)計(jì)更加嚴(yán)密一些，執(zhí)行程序更加透明一些。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開(kāi)篇簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片的內(nèi)容，同時(shí)結(jié)合圖片內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確傳遞出這幅漫畫(huà)的寓意。
2. 自然過(guò)渡，引出高考加分政策的本意是好的，為下文轉(zhuǎn)折做準(zhǔn)備。
3. 明確表達(dá)本文的主要觀(guān)點(diǎn)：高考加分政策存在一些問(wèn)題。并從兩方面論證。
4. 采用舉例論證，通過(guò)典型例證，增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)了論證方法的多樣性。
5. 末段總結(jié)全文，重申觀(guān)點(diǎn)，并針對(duì)問(wèn)題提出建議。
要點(diǎn)用法
recruiter n. 招聘人員；招收人員
magnifier n. 放大鏡
imply v. 表明，說(shuō)明
confusion n. 困惑，不知所措
undeniably adv. 不可否認(rèn)
compensate for 彌補(bǔ)，補(bǔ)償
overall development 全面發(fā)展
corruption n. 腐敗，貪污
non-transparent adj . 不透明
implementation n. 實(shí)施，執(zhí)行
take advantage of 利用
injustice n. 不公平，不公正
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. According to his observation, the final result of NCEE is like a big tree with so many branches of additional scores that it astonishes him, which implies the confusion that the policy of additional score of NCEE has brought to people.
首段末句采用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，引申圖片傳達(dá)的真實(shí)寓意，在圖畫(huà)作文中，這是將圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容的真實(shí)意義表達(dá)出來(lái)的常用句型，總結(jié)為T(mén)his/It obviously implies that + 從句或者This implies + 名詞（短語(yǔ)）。
2. It is suggested that the policy be designed more strictly and be implemented more transparently.
It is suggested that...為固定句型，通常用于針對(duì)某些問(wèn)題提出建議，其他替換句型還有It is recommended that..., it is advised that...等，注意that從句應(yīng)使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，其中，should一詞可以省略。
